ADELAIDE PLAINS POETRY COMPETITION 2019
JUDGE’S REPORT
In my consideration of the 111 entries received I looked particularly for beauty of expression, use of
imagery and metaphors as well as demonstration of emotional attachment to a particular location.
imagery and metaphors as well as demonstration of emotional attachment to a particular location.
For first place I chose the poem, In the Shadows, which makes good use of metaphor and expresses a
clearing of thoughts as a result being in a specific location.
clearing of thoughts as a result being in a specific location.
I awarded second place to ARRIVING IN PORT PIRIE, an evocative expression of memories tied to a
particular place, which were a reminder of other significant locations, a process which many readers
may identify with.
particular place, which were a reminder of other significant locations, a process which many readers
may identify with.
For third place I chose Birdsville Tracking, which demonstrated beauty of expression, compact form and
very good use of metaphor to bring out the features of this particular location.
very good use of metaphor to bring out the features of this particular location.
Highly Commended:
I chose Barren Lands for its use of arid lands as a metaphor for feelings of desolation and for its economy
of expression.
of expression.
Commended:
Salamanca. This poem evokes memories tied to a particular place, illustrated with excellent imagery.
Somewhere in Tasmania. A well realised poem recalling a significant time and place.
Confined. I liked the shape of this poem and the use of metaphor.
Minnamurra Falls. Of all the rhyming poems, this one was a delight to read.
Dispossessed. An emotive description of a harrowing time.
The Bush, Shelley Beach. A well rhymed story of childhood days.
In conclusion, I read many poems which expressed heartfelt feelings, some better expressed than others.
I commend all the entrants for having a go and encourage each one to continue to develop their writing
skills which will contribute a great deal to our understanding of life today.
I commend all the entrants for having a go and encourage each one to continue to develop their writing
skills which will contribute a great deal to our understanding of life today.